Review stories by MongoLuehring
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Posts: 23 (12/21/03 19:00:18) |
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SlytherinLinzi |
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Posts: 2 (12/21/03 20:14:36) |
Donna,
This was a wonderful beginning! I love the way you write. You're descriptive without overdoing it. Very intrigued at Harry's sullenness, and what's going to happen with Snape as DADA teacher. *off to read next chapter* Linzi |
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dietevil |
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Posts: 2 (12/22/03 18:55:29) |
Hi Donna,
Excellent start you have; your writing style flows very smoothly and you've already introduced several interesting plot elements - Snape as DADA, depressed Harry & Hagrid, Lucius wanting revenge, and Hermione's goal of interHouse unity. I look forward to reading more soon! Anye |
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MongoLuehring |
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Posts: 2 (12/22/03 19:24:22) |
Thanks, Linzi! There should be some more chapters up by the 29th, I believe. I hope the rest of the story is to your liking, too!
 Donna
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MongoLuehring |
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Posts: 2 (12/22/03 19:25:28) |
Hey Anye! I'm very excited about having you read/review! I love your writing...any feedback you give will be most welcome. See ya! Donna
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Posts: 1 (09/16/09 22:08:12) |
I loved the book, however i must say that i was a bit put off by some of the "hand-written" letters, most notably the letters from Dumbldore, because
I could not read them. However i loved the story on the whole and cant wait 2 read more from you.
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